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First Chapter Analysis

Is your first chapter all it can be?

  • 30 minutes
  • 250 US dollars
  • Location 1

Service Description

The first chapter is the most important real estate in your novel, so it vitally important to make it to shine. We’ll review your first chapter in detail and make sure all the key elements are included. You’ll receive email feedback detailing what works, what doesn’t, what you need to change, and what might be unclear. We also discuss voice, genre requirements, craft issues, and your own personal strengths and weaknesses.


Contact Details

  • abigaildrake@comcast.net


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